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News media is important in our society. Why is it so important? Do you think its influence is generally positive or negative?

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News are an indispensable part of our everyday life. Media produces a great service to everyone in any situation.
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 essay will explain us important, positive and negative effects of news in the following paragraphs. News play a significant role in our lives. News make people aware about the upcoming threats, politics and many other things happening all over the world. There are several news channels which broadcast the news in different language and
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 give live updates of the current situation.
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 can be helpful to the masses to gain knowledge easily. News are telecasted by different ways like as T.V, radio, internet, social sites which are helpful for people to gain information in many situations. There are many benefits of news as without the news media, we would be totally in the dark and cut off from the rest of the world.
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 are the mediator of Human beings to the government as with the help of a reporter's individual can raise their voice on any issue and local bodies can listen and help to tackle the problem.
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, they can provide justice to the common man. To add more, they help to spread the culture and lifestyle of different areas all over the globe. As well as, there are many separate news programs related to business, politics, weather, and environmental issues.
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 makes us easy to select the program according to their own Choice.
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, the media has some downsides as they telecast some wrong information on their channels which lead to many conflicts, riots, violation and protect in the society.
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, paparazzi shows, private life of famous personalities to improve troops and
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 is not a good thing to show the personal activity in front of the whole world. To wrap out the whole l concludes that the news media is a necessity of our soul and its influence more positively on society.
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