Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society.other argue that being citizen involves more responsibilities.Discuss what is your opinion?

People and
society
plays a key role in
growth
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the growth
and prosperity of any given country.
it
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It
is often believed by some that paying taxes is
only responsibility
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the only responsibility
of the people while others opine that they have more
resoponsibilites
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
and I agree with the later.
This
essay will discuss both the view and share my thoughts. On one side, it is often believed by some that contributing to
society
is by paying tax in stipulated time frame so that local societies have enough funds to improve the
transporation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
through roads, rails and air. In some of the countries, where tax rates are high, provide free
healthcare
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health care
and primary education to all the citizens is yet another reason people think they are contributing to
major extent
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a major extent
to
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of
country
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the country
where they live in.
on
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On
the other side, many people argue that people should take up more
responsibilites
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
in taking care of
environment
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the environment
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree with the same.
Firstly
, each and every individual should do their bit to protect environment by conserving natural resources, taking measures to consume biodegradable
matrials
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
materials
where possible which reduces the earth, water and air pollution. Global waring is
bigger
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the biggest
the big
the bigger
biggest
concern and each and everyone should do their bit as government alone
can not
can not
cannot
do much without everyone's support. Most of these problems
can not
can not
cannot
be solved by just having money and all people should support the cause to make
the better
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the best
living
for
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in
society
.
Secondly
, participating in
volunterring
of your own free will or design; done by choice; not forced or compelled
voluntary
volunteering
activites
any specific behavior
activities
like teaching in schools, planting trees, protecting
ednagered
(of flora or fauna) in imminent danger of extinction
endangered
species which
affects
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affect
the food cycle by joining various NGO's helps the country in a great way.
Finally
, having social concern to other people and showing
emphathy
understanding and entering into another's feelings
empathy
to other people would creates healthy societies and improve the nation. To conclude, despite people having
different opinion
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a different opinion
different opinions
, I think that citizens have many
responsibilites
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
such
as protecting the environment and create
healthy
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a healthy society
society
is outmost important other
then
paying taxes.
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