Many people are choosing to find information online rather than in books. Is this development positive or negative?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Before digital technologies
such
Linking Words
as electronic tools, social media and mobile phones were invented, there was an only way to study something new,
this
Linking Words
was the books. People used to go to the libraries and find the
book
Use synonyms
, which you needed, and
then
Linking Words
gather what they want to know.
However
Linking Words
, nowadays, all the individuals have their own
cellphones
Suggestion
cell phones
, which include the enormous amount of
information
Use synonyms
,
as a result
Linking Words
, we do not have to
search
Use synonyms
something from books. In my belief,
this
Linking Words
development has more positive sides than the negative.
Firstly
Linking Words
, using your mobile devices to find something you want to know saves your time. It takes few minutes to find what exactly you are looking for. It has only three moves: take your device, go to the web browser and
search
Use synonyms
something you want to find.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, using
book
Use synonyms
takes
few hours
Suggestion
a few hours
to find the exact
information
Use synonyms
.
For example
Linking Words
, you should go to the library to find
Use synonyms
right
Suggestion
the right book
book
Use synonyms
and
search
Use synonyms
it
alphabetically
Accept comma addition
alphabetically, then
then
Linking Words
search
Use synonyms
again
to
Suggestion
for
the specific
information
Use synonyms
you want to read.
Secondly
Linking Words
, making a printed
book
Use synonyms
is very harmful to the environment. We cut more than a hundred
of million trees
Suggestion
million trees
to make newspaper, books and magazines annually,
for example
Linking Words
.
Moreover
Linking Words
, it influences on the world’s biggest problem, climate change. Because of the fact that trees help stop climate change by removing carbon dioxide from the air, storing carbon in the trees and soil, and releasing oxygen into the atmosphere. Trees provide many benefits to us, but we cut trees to read news.
Also
Linking Words
, we need billions of gallon water to recycle
papers
Suggestion
paper
or prepare papers, which do not give the eco-friendly effects.
Study
Suggestion
The study
shows that online reading devices
such
Linking Words
as kindle is more beneficial in
environment
Suggestion
an environment
the environment
environments
.
Thirdly
Linking Words
, we lost in the countless amount of data and it is possible that to take wrong
information
Use synonyms
. Everyone has the
right
Use synonyms
to freedom of thought and expression. Based on
this
Linking Words
right
Use synonyms
people
Suggestion
person
express their misconceptions on online and it makes us confuse and lose. When we have more
information
Use synonyms
, we have to filter it more.
This
Linking Words
tons of data could help us, only if we use it
right
Use synonyms
. In short, online world
give
Suggestion
gives
us many
opportunity
Suggestion
opportunities
if we use it in a correct way.
Moreover
Linking Words
, we need to
filter what
Accept comma addition
filter, what
are we
read
prepare for eating by applying heat
ready
to save our invaluable time. More importantly, we all live in one world, which means we should love our environments
and try save
Suggestion
and try to save
our beautiful nature.
Submitted by Enerel Ugtakhbayar on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: