Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
A
year
gap
between college and university level can work as bridge to cultivate new skill. At the same time
it can create a sense of disinterest for study in the psychology of students due to persisting gap
between the college and university level.
To start with the productive
development of students in Suggestion
product
this
one year
gap
, I believe that if the students potentially invest their time
for learning, extracurricular activities like coding, programming, editing and so on then
this
year
gap
will be proved beneficial for them. In addition
, they can engage themselves in part time
jobs which would help them to add work experience in their life. Besides
, it would give them a spare time
to think upon their interest of career which would lead them to a clear journey of their career.
However
, most often this
spare time
can result in worst possibilities for students. Because, mostly it is seen that the students lose their patients and drag their life toward heinous activities like drug dealing, human trafficking, terrorism and so on due to the greed of earning money or bad influence. As a result
, their bright future hides in the darkness of crimes and they become burdened and disgrace for the society. Turning to the point of year
gap
, there goes a proverb that "An idle mind is the factory of the devil". So, In my view I am not sure that this
long would be effective for the mass portion of students as they are most likely to engage in crimes rather than extra curricular activities. Also
a student's mind may deviate from refreshments and draw toward depression due to the long interval of the gap
. Moreover
, their potential toward career may also
reduce.
In short, I would like to conclude that a year
interval between college and university can be more harmful for students.Submitted by Amisha Nath on
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