IELTS essay, topic: Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home, why and what are the advantages/disadvantages? Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

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In our modern society ordering

food

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is a trend

that is

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very much practiced,

therefore

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preparing meals at home is rejected by us, the people. The main reasons for

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a preference may be the low-price that some restaurants’ have and without any doubt the time that we can save with ready nourishment. Even though fast

food

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has some clear advantages, its disadvantages should not be forfeited. On one hand,

food

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delivery might be the perfect solution for a busy individual who has no time for making something to eat. We all know that cooking takes a while and requires quite some work, in fact, some of us need an entire day to complete just a meal.

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, it is more expensive to make your own

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, compared with delivery one. To illustrate, to prepare something to eat

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you need to buy what is needed,

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you will need to cook, and afterwards you need to clean. In

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context, for someone who is rushed by the time and needs something fast and economically, ordering

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from home is a huge advantage.

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, one of the disadvantages of fast

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is the fact that you don’t know how fresh your

food

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is. One main aspect that everyone desires is to have fresh products,

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cooking at home is the safest method to have that. To illustrate, myself, I have worked in a fast

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for few months and I can say that not everything was fresh there, a matter of fact, just the salad was duly brought. For

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reason, ready-made aliments represent a vast disadvantage for those people who want to have a fresh meal. In conclusion, I believe that the disadvantages of nutriments delivery are something to be aware of,

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people should be served with fresh product. Not doing so can rise big consequences on people’s

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

fast-paced lifestyle
convenience
time-saving
busy schedules
availability
variety
affordable
meal preparation
cleanup
cuisines
ingredient availability
health implications
sodium
sugar
unhealthy fats
dietary-related health issues
environmental impact
plastic waste
environmental degradation
cooking skills

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IELTS essay, topic: Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home, why and what are the advantages/disadvantages? Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

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The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

Many small local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area.How does this effect local communities? How could this situation be improved?

In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?