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Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family. Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job? What other factors should be considered?

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More and more people are thinking that income of one
job
 is one of the most important factors when selecting a
job
. In my case, obviously, money is not the top reason that I would consider in deciding whether to take a
job
 or not.
Firstly
, I am a newbie who has little experience about the real workforce;
consequently
, in order to accumulate hands-on skills, finding a
job
 in my study filed is the primary task for me.
Therefore
, in
this
 case, I would not consider the salary as that important element.
Secondly
, without any pressure of supporting my family, I would take the personal
development
 as my priority. If the company that I am about to choose has tons of opportunities for individual
development
,
such
 as the chance of getting
promotion
Suggestion
promoted
, or the chance of involving into an international project, I would definitely prefer to stay with that company. The above factors are only confined to my personal case; for more general cases, there are more elements that should be
taking
Suggestion
taken
 into consideration.
Firstly
, if the
job
 could provide the worker a balance between work life and personal life,
then
,
that is
 the
job
 that the worker could choose because there will be more spare time to learn new knowledge, which is beneficial for one person’s long-term
development
.
In addition
, in terms of mental health, working
at
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in
 an enjoyable and motivated workforce will bring the worker meaningful purpose to work daily. Our weight of life
dose
mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'
does
 not defined by how much money we earn. To conclude, with my situation, I would arrange the personal
development
 as my
first
 choice.
Although
 different cases may vary the choices among different people, it is better to make a best suit selection under your specific circumstance. You have your own right to make your own decision.
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  • financial stability
  • job satisfaction
  • fulfillment
  • mental health
  • aligns with
  • productive career
  • career progression
  • growth potential
  • work-life balance
  • flexible hours
  • telecommuting
  • vacation time
  • professional responsibilities
  • working environment
  • corporate culture
  • toxic environment
  • stress and burnout
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