Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In schools, students are learning to analyse literature, calculating using trigonometry and understanding how
photosyntheseis
synthesis of compounds with the aid of radiant energy (especially in plants)
photosynthesis
works, but often students are inexperienced and helpless after graduation when encountering the real
world
. It is
therefore
agrued
united by being of the same opinion
agreed
argued
that
shools
an educational institution
schools
should teach their students how to survive financially in the
world
.
This
topic is difficult though. Many educators
thinks
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think
that a school is supposed to teach students in subjects that they will most probably not encounter again post graduation, so that teachers can develop open minded and well informed individuals. At the same time, it can be argued that
shyools
a state of extreme confusion and disorder
chaos
hould
past tense of "will"
would
impart skills that would be
applicable
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applied
in everyday life.
Mathematis
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Mathematics
,
for example
, is supposed to not only communicate actual mathematics skill, but
also
teach logic to
studentgs
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
.
However
, schools are supposed
to prepared
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to be prepared
the youths for their lives following high school. Currently
this
goal is not
full
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fully
met, as often students are unable to handle their
finanxes
assets in the form of money
finances
sensibly
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sensitized
sensible
sensed
sensitive
and
therefore
can often face significant problems. Schools that teach students how to survive financially could change
this
.
This
significant shift in the ideology of education is unlikely to take place soon, as the education
syten
(photography) the act of assuming a certain position (as for a photograph or portrait)
sitting
Stein
stone
has been in place for too long to be easily changed.
Also
a change of
this
scale would be
costlyk
entailing great loss or sacrifice
costly
, as teachers would have to be trained and a syllabus for
this
potential subject would have to be created.
However
, in some countries,
for example
Germany, a community subject is
avialble
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
in
whih
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
politics and finances are
discuused
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
disclosed
disguised
.
This
leaves students from Germany in a better situation to deal with
fiances
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fiancee's
in
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with
their lives.
Moreover
, in
this
growing
world
with lots of complexities, learning economic and financial aspects of issues can result in improving problem solving abilities which empower people to encounter
difficutlies
an effort that is inconvenient
difficulties
and boost the financial security in their lives. In
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
world
, more advanced the
world
becomes, more sophistications people will face. All these complexities have economic aspects and all people need the related knowledge to
tackles
Suggestion
tackle
these kinds of problems and schools are one of the best place to teach them to people specially youngster
.
Accept space
.
To sum up, there are clear benefits of including techniques and knowledge to face financial issues in the
student’sl
curriculum.
Submitted by JIMMY SHARMA on

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