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Psychologists have known for many years that color can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to color schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does color influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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It has been observed that colours can have an impact on a human emotion;
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, the usages of them should be properly regarded. I agree with
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 discuss how colours can influence a person's life and work quality as well. It is of the nature of their job that interior designers can understand the psychological effects of colours on people. Identifying users and their needs in the design process is crucial so that the designers can consciously pick painting schemes. In hospitals,
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, neutral paints like soft white and light blue are mostly utilized. These colours generate calmness and tranquility, which are essential to the treatment and recovery of patients and greatly aid the effort of
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the doctors
. From another perspective, feelings towards different pigments can relate to both the health and work productivity of a person. In response to pleasant emotions, the human brain maintains its wellness by producing beneficial substances. For businesses, improvement in employees' mental health will heighten the work and service qualities.
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, many companies integrate green spaces in their office areas. These natural shades induce freshness and people tend to get relief from stress if their workspace have plants. To give another example, for artists, a right colour palette will enhance their creativity to perform better. It is arguable that being energized
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 means good health to the artists. In conclusion, I believe colours can affect not only human's mental state, but in other aspects as well. They can be used with appropriate intentions to improve people's living and occupational performance.
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