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Major companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think it has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sports have always been a popular medium among many companies for advertising their products.
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 is rising even more as the popularity of games and players increase. Some parts of society view it as having detrimental effects on sports.
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, I believe that the benefits
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 promotional technique brings outweigh the ill effects. In the following paragraphs, I intend to discuss both sides of the issue and justify my opinion. Primarily, advertisement brings lots of revenue to the sports organizers, media, and the government. Companies understand that using sports as their marketing platform would allow them to reach to the wide spectrum of audience, and so they are willing to spend outrageously using every method possible be a print media,
national channel
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the national channel
, or giant billboards on the roads.
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 empowers the organizers and the government with much needed funds, which they can utilize to foster the sports
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, by investing in better facilities and world class trainings.
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, it benefits companies
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too, as
 they can see their market share and bottom line improving. The whole process
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 creates many job opportunities, directly and indirectly, contributing to the National GDP.
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, some people are of the opinion that nothing comes free. If the companies are spending lavishly on the sports they expect the players to win the games as the brand image of their products are associated with the player’s performance.
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 creates
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 pressure on the athletes and affects their
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game
 and career too. After
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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 both the sides of the arguments, I am of the opinion that negative effects are not serious and can be tackled. As players become more mature in their games they learn how to handle pressure. But, the benefits that come along with the advertisements are numerous and varied.
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