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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society?

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Nowadays, the
population
 of some countries includes a relatively large
number
 of older people compared with the
number
 of young adults.
Although
 having an aging
population
 has some benefits, I completely agree that the disadvantages of
this
 situation outweigh the advantages. One commonly cited advantage of aging
population
 is that the elderly has more free-time to contribute to society. They
also
 have more experience and knowledge in some specialized fields thanks to many years of working, which assists the elderly in doing some works that not only to help people but
also
 to make money and receive
good
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better
 benefits after retirement.
For example
, they can take care of the babies for young parents or become a tutor, a gardener… Despite of
this
, there are a large
number
 of drawbacks to have an aging society.
First
 of all, having more older people decreases the economic growth of a country. There will be lack of young manpower to work and accumulate good experience, which can’t boost the country’s development and has negative influences.
For instance
, the aging
population
 in Japan leads to numerous foreign workers to come and work illegally.
Furthermore
, an aging
population
also
 increases a
number
 of diseases related to old age,
such
 as Alzheimer, diabetes, heart diseases and along with other health problems.
This
 needs to provide more health care services and medical care cost, which will be a pressure
for
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from
 the government and reduce the budget for other issues
such
 as education or
economy
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the economy
. In conclusion,
although
 there are advantages to have an aging society, it is clear that the
population
 of a country growing older can decrease the country’s economy and increase health problems. On balance, I would agree that having a large
number
 of older people is detrimental to any country.
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