“The young generation of teenagers is less well behaved than the previous generations of teenagers.” Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, life has changed dramatically

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technological developments and

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, which has impacted greatly on how people live, interact and communicate.

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, it is true that many people, especially older people believe that the behaviours of the young

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of

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these days are worse than the preceding

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of

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.

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I agree that some

teenagers

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are extremely well-behaved, I believe that the behaviour of the young

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of

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nowadays

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worsen

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than the preceding

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and the reasons will be covered in

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essay. On the one hand, a number of

youngsters

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are strongly aware of their responsibilities in their family and

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society. They are more intelligent, more responsible and more well-mannered. These offsprings have made a great contribution to the countries

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as inventing new technology to assist humans in working, volunteering financial support for the poor and protecting the environment. Not only maintaining the culture and good values of the previous

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,

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nowadays are devoting their life to

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their country.

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,

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, most of the

teenagers

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have a tendency to be less well-behaved than the preceding

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. One commonly cited reason is the impact of the Internet on

teenagers

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. The young

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have a great opportunity to connect with the Internet, which

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a large number of detrimental information, videos and games. Many

youngsters

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are addicted to these things and become isolated from the world outside.

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, they turn into anti-social individuals and commit serious crimes. Another reason for the bad behaviours of

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is the lack of care from parents. In modern life, working parents are always busy with professional duties, which leaves them alone

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time left for child-caring responsibilities.

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,

youngsters

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can hardly distinguish between socially acceptable and accusable behaviours, which make them easily make mistakes

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as acting less polite and respectful to others or they can be poisoned by harmful lifestyles

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as violence or impoliteness. In conclusion,

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there are still a large number of

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that

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are well-behaved,

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the young generation of

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nowadays is worse than the previous generation.