University students always focus on one special subject but some people think university should encourage their students to study a range of subjects. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Recent years have witnessed an upward trend in the number of those university students who mainly pay attention to some particular carrier oriented subjects. Whilst, few people

believes

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believe

that there are other subjects who carries equal weightage and institutions should

made

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make

them focus on

such

subjects.

Personaly

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Personally

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

strongly agree with the

metioned

make reference to

mentioned

statement but

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statement, but

there are other fundamentals which cannot be overlooked.

This

essay will discuss both side and gives various examples of Indian government and a survey conducted by United Nations Organization in 2007 to demonstrate and prove arguments.

First

and foremost, these days being a

successfull

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

man or women

is

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are

of major importance and a journey of a child from a school to university had taught them to focus on

wide vareity

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a wide variety

wide variety

of

subject

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subjects

.

This

seems to be fair at some extent perhaps,

sometimese

on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

sometimes

an individual is unable to

develope

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

proper understanding and basics about particular major. So students should concentrate on one

subject

rather than many, which is good for future

carrier

the particular occupation for which you are trained

career

planning but

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planning, but

sometimes it may bring devastation in

form

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the form

of poor grades rest of

subjects

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the subjects

.

Furthermore

,

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,

in a country like

India where

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India, where

education system

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the education system

is not fully developed and sometimes may force students to opt for

range

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a range

the range

of subjects through

this

approach many local universities and colleges conduct exams in which

ther

in or at that place

there

their

Thor

is mandatory for an individual to appear and get admission. To add to

this

,

this

will

further

become difficult to manage and carry

forword

at or to or toward the front

forward

. Learning a particular

subject

is a healthy habit towards gaining cognitive, and logical understanding. It allows one's mind to think and act

accordingly

. All in all,

although

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe far

indepth

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in depth

knowledge is

good but

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good, but

sometimes it

creats

make or cause to be or to become

creates

problems. Overall, paying attention on a particular

subject

is

good

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better

more good

rather than cramming a range of subjects.