People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

Nowadays advertisements are playing vital role in the market. Many people are buying the
product
as per the media advertisement. Present
life
, many advertisements are
telecating
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
telecasting
telecommuting
through the media,
thus affect
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thus, affect
our day
today
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to day
life
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life, such
such
us daily routine work and our culture.
other
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Another
Other
point of
view
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view, this
this
will improve our effective
life
for
exmable
to reduce the
product
selection and
shoping
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
shipping
activity.
This
essay will discuss about the pro and cons of the advertisement. Many adverts are telecasting low quality
product
such
as electronic items and junk foods. Current
senerio
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
younsters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
insiders
are buying the
product
as per the ads. They had bought the low quality
product
and they found defect had been affecting the durability
product
and usage. So they were frustrated and immediately replacing the
product
due to no warranty.Many
childs
a young person of either sex
children
child
orchids
are changing their food
habbit
an established custom
habit
habits
habitat
due to the advert. Many ads are
puplising
(electronics) a sharp transient wave in the normal electrical state (or a series of such transients)
pulsing
continously
at every point
continuously
related to the junk food.
Childrens
Suggestion
Children
are asking
to
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for
their parents for buy the food.
Thus
mainly impact their health.
people are think
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People, think
People are think
People think
people think
people are thought
before to buy the
product
. If
childre
a young person of either sex
children
and
younsters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
were getting
advise
a proposal for an appropriate course of action
advice
from
senior person
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the senior person
a senior person
senior people
.
Technology
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Technological
improvement in modern
life
are compressing
Suggestion
is compressing
the selection or buying the
product
. Many
peaple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
are seeing the advertisement and select the
product
as per the specification and feature. Its improve to
idetify
recognize as being; establish the identity of someone or something
identify
the good
Suggestion
the best
product
.
For
example to
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example, to
buy the cell phone,
Firstly
the checking the ads and understand the
qulaity
an essential and distinguishing attribute of something or someone
quality
, features
,
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,
cost and durability. So they select and buy the products are easily and very
confort
a state of being relaxed and feeling no pain
comfort
zone.
Finally
, many companies are telecasting their
product
due to improve their market.
but
Suggestion
But
people to take care of selecting the
product
. If once select the
product
to get
advise
a proposal for an appropriate course of action
advice
from your parents or senior person.
Thus improve
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Thus, improve
your
shoping
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
experience and value of your money. In
this
moder
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
world many
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world, many
fields are having both of
side
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sides
. So main responsibility is in our buyer hand.
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