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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is believed by many people that nowadays, the
population
 of youngsters living in some countries is
comparitively
in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
comparatively
 higher than the elderly people residing there.
Although
, the large
number
 of
youth
 signifies the growth and economic development of that country, with the hike in working professionals, the employment opportunities need to be increased. I strongly believe that if we are able to overcome these
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
, the increase in the
number
 of
youth
 would be beneficial. One evident
benifit
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
 of having more
number
 of young
population
 is to enhance the country's workforce as well the defence.
Moreover
, the youngsters are more effective in performing a task using new techniques than old people. To illustrate, the 'One Child' policy in China has resulted in the decline of the
number
 of
youth
,
as a result
, their military sector has degraded as compared to India,
who's
of which person?
whose
millitary
of or relating to the study of the principles of warfare
military
 professionals are increasing daily.
On the other hand
,
this
 rise in young
population
 has
also
 resulted in high unemployment rate.
Consequently
, the unemployed people tend to involve in various criminal activities that can have a serious impact on our society.
Further
, the
elderly people
Accept comma addition
elderly, people
 with their experience and profound knowledge can guide the
youth
 towards
right direction
Suggestion
the right direction
 and instill them with morals.
However
, with the intervention of government, various job opportunities can be created to satisfy the youngsters. To conclude, by providing various job opportunities and inculcating the young
population
, we are able to mitigate the
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
 related to their rise.
Therefore
,
this
 will result in enhancing the economy of the country and its development.
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