Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe that actions can be taken to bring about the change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

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The expansion of the human race is at the cost of the lives of the animals and the plants. Some people argue that

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activity can't be stopped,

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believe that it has to be curbed by making proper plans. I

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support the latter idea, as the flora and fauna have to be preserved for the fear of extinction and the development has to be made at the barren places. On the one hand, growth of the mankind leads to the development of new towns and cities.

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construction is being done by cutting the forests and killing the beasts.

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, due to the lack of planning, the new places are near the water resources,

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disturbing the ecosystem.

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, men hunt the wildlife for the meat and the leather products.

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has a negative impact and that attitude can't be changed.

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, according to the UN resolution, countries of the Asia are overcrowded and are built by sacrificing the nature.

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, there is a belief that the concepts of the origin of new societies have to be amended, in order to prevent the

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damage and I

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back

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idea.

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, the behaviour of the people towards the natural sources has to be changed.

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, the government has to put a ban on the destruction of plants for building houses and factories.

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, the citizens are to be encouraged to plant more trees for the reduction of pollution.

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, the same model is being followed in the European countries. To conclude, I think that the activities of mankind have to be under strict vigilance in order to keep the world green and to keep all the species alive.

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Topic Vocabulary:

negative impact
extinct
deforestation
pollution
habitat destruction
mitigate
reverse
stricter regulations
protected areas
endangered species
education and awareness campaigns
biodiversity
consequences
renewable energy sources
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