Older generation often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thoughts and behavior. Most people argue that it is not helpful for younger generations to prepare for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
During the current era of modernization, the new generation has less tendency for
traditions
, ideas and beliefs that elders still kept hold of them. I strongly believe that these thoughts are the valuable heritage of mankind and might even play a significant role in our societies. This
essay, revealing the rationales behind the arguments, demonstrates the reasons why people still should understand and keep their traditions
alive.
Some people, among them elders and wise men and women, reason that traditions
should be sacredly preserved and followed. Indeed, these so-called old thoughts are the essence of mankind’s experience through the ups and downs of life. As an example, having the main meals of the day in a certain schedule with all family members together is a well-respected tradition; a tradition which according to
the contemporary science of psychology as well as
health proved to be a " must to
do” in every modern way of living. The tradition comes from centuries agoChange the verb form
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,
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mental
and physical condition of the people. Correct article usage
the mental
Therefore
, it is evident that not only traditions
should be preserved as heritage, but also
some of them shall be followed as the cultural foundation of every society.
On the other hand
, many stand against it and argue that traditional thoughts and beliefs shall be abandoned as they resemble and include nothing but history and in some case
humiliation. Fix the agreement mistake
cases
For instance
, animal and human sacrifices were held as religious rituals and ceremonies. These sorts of traditions
are not anymore accepted and are being considered heinous and monsters, hence
, traditions
cannot be as
a blueprint for humankind. In Change preposition
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this
regard, noteworthy to mention is the fact that,
not many beliefs are as Remove the comma
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such
and with a simple reasoning they can be distinguished from those which are fruitful.
In conclusion, the social and historical background of societies and human developments created these notions, understanding and traditions
which incorporate experience and wisdom. It also
should be borne in mind that some of them shall not be blindly followed, those which represent the dark ages of human
struggling to survive and can be logically left out.Fix the agreement mistake
humans
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task response
Ensure that your essay responds fully to the prompt, giving equal weight to both agreeing and disagreeing. Provide a clear and balanced argument while demonstrating a clear position on the issue. Consider addressing the opposing view as well to present a more comprehensive response.
coherence and cohesion
The logical structure of your essay is generally good, but there are some areas where the flow of ideas could be improved. Ensure that each paragraph contributes to the overall argument, and that there is a clear progression of ideas from introduction to conclusion.