Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools . others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Dicuss both view views and give your own opinion.

People have different perspectives on whether single-sex schools or coed schools have more pros for students. While I accept that there are some advantages that can be seen in mixed education, I would argue that same-sex schools are likely to have more benefits for boys and girls. On the one hand, mixing students’
gender
brings respect for
gender
equality as well as
promotion
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promotes
promote
promoting
socialization for adolescents.
First
of all, students in integrated schools
are likely deeply respect
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are likely deeply to respect
deeply likely respect
are likely deeply respect
for
gender
equality and co-existence. It is due to the fact that mixed education gives a chance for both genders to understand each other difficulties and characteristics.
Secondly
, coed schools promote socialization in adolescents. Some people who
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
in single schools are awkward to socialize as well as interact with the opposite sex since they are not used to doing it.
Conversely
, coed student experience it several times, so it prepares for them not only communication
skills but
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skills, but
also
building the foundation for their
vocational
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vocations
vocation
and social future.
On the other hand
, it is possible to argue that single-sex schools bring more benefits to the student.
Firstly
, there is no doubt that same-sex schools bring a more specific curriculum for children. The teachers have more opportunities to provide techniques tailored toward
individuals’ needs
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the individuals’ needs
and learning styles of their students.
For example
, the curriculum for girls can bring more some kinds of
colorful
having striking color
colourful
stuff while some competitive activities can be added to boys’ lessons to attract their attention.
Secondly
, the concentration on studying can be improved in specific-
gender
schools. It is undeniable that adolescents are often distracted from the opposite
gender
,
hence
, the early relationship might appear. It leads to deterioration of their performances in exams, and students,
therefore
, enrolling in single-sex education
are
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is
likely to have
more high
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higher
grade than who do not. In conclusion, from the reasons mentioned above, I myself firmly believe that
although
integrated schools bring some considerable advantages for student,
gender
-
specifec
(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique
specific
schools still role a best choice.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

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