More and more people today are becoming overly dependent on the internet and phones. Is that a positive or negative development?

Many humans use technologies
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, phones too much. Using them can have a lot of positive and a bit negative effects that it can make a suitable life among a society. Nowadays, technology has many positive points. People’s life really depends on the
internet
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. And
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, we do each task with
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the internet
and phones, and we can transfer many information by them.
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Moreover we
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Moreover, we
can read all news of countries around the world in less than a minute. We can search about topics and find and compare them till we achieve a good answer related to them. And
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, we learn and improve our level with
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. Because of
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, educational cost will decrease.
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, we need telephones to connect quickly to other countries, even we can see each other by a variety of softwares.
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, everything can have some negative points as well as positive impacts. We should use the
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and cell phones, but not too much. Because they can bring a bit problems and lead humans to see each other face to face very little.
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, it can ruin family relationships and eventually cause depression. When we speak with cell phone, it might waste our time a lot.
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, many children use
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the internet
too much when they are teenager, even younger and we understand which they are depressed. In conclusion, using of the
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and phones is too much and people rely on it, but in my opinion, they can make our life easier and safer than before. So, it is a perfect achievement.

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