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Band 7

You are planning a vacation and you need someone to look after your cat while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, • explain why you are going away for a week • describe the cat • ask the neighbour if they can perform specific duties to care for the cat

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Dear Sarah, I hope you are quite well, the reason for my letter is that I am going to Niagara
Fall
Change preposition
in Fall

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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 and chill out
this
Linking Words

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 week. My cat doesn't have anyone to take care of him,
therefore
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, I wish
hope
Add the particle
to hope

It appears that the verb hope should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.

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 you could help me
doing
Change the form of the verb
do

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb doing. Consider changing it.

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 with some particular tasks. As I told you before, I have been extremely stressed over the
last
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 year due to my job, which has been demanding a lot from me.
Hence
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, I decided to take a week off in order to relax and spend time with my family. During my vacation, I need someone to look after my cat,
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply

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who is called named Arthur.
It
Correct pronoun usage
apply

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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He is a cute and lovely grey
gray
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grey

The spelling of gray is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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persian
Change the capitalization
Persian

It appears that the word persian may be a proper noun in this context. Consider capitalizing the word.

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 kitten, that likes to play with kids when he is not sleeping. I would like to know if you could realize handle some tasks to care for him. He needs to be fed twice a day, so put a handful of cat food in a bowl in the morning and evening.
Besides
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 that, I need you to check if he has fresh water daily, brush his fur twice a week at least, and clean up clean out the litter box every day. Let me know if you can do it , I look forward to your reply. Warm wishes, Carol.

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