You are planning a vacation and you need someone to look after your cat while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, • explain why you are going away for a week • describe the cat • ask the neighbour if they can perform specific duties to care for the cat

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Dear Sarah, I hope you are quite well, the reason for my letter is that I am going to Niagara

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and chill out

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week. My cat doesn't have anyone to take care of him,

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, I wish

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you could help me

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with some particular tasks. As I told you before, I have been extremely stressed over the

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year due to my job, which has been demanding a lot from me.

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, I decided to take a week off in order to relax and spend time with my family. During my vacation, I need someone to look after my cat,

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who is called named Arthur.

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He is a cute and lovely grey

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persian

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kitten, that likes to play with kids when he is not sleeping. I would like to know if you could realize handle some tasks to care for him. He needs to be fed twice a day, so put a handful of cat food in a bowl in the morning and evening.

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that, I need you to check if he has fresh water daily, brush his fur twice a week at least, and clean up clean out the litter box every day. Let me know if you can do it , I look forward to your reply. Warm wishes, Carol.

CarolinaThu Jul 09 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

220 words

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