You want to apply to a private college seeking admission for a bachelor degree. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment and can not get admitted to the college without some help. Write a letter to the Principal of the college explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.

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Dear Sir /
Madame
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, Please be requested. I accomplished
average
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score of 80% in the 12th standard exam in the specialisation of accountancy and commerce. I am the one merely school topper. Currently, I am seeking
an
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apply
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admission for
bachelor
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a bachelor
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of commerce at your college for the upcoming academic year of 2020. Unfortunately, My family is facing a financial problem due to the current Covid-19 situation. My Father is a single earning person at a moment. He dreams about me a lot to become a good position in my career. It will not
be happen
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without your support. Even though, I scored a good mark in all the subjects. I need a fund to pay the college fees without interpretation of my studies. I saw an advertisement on your college notice board
stated
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that it welcomes a school topper where they could get a scholarship and other benefits as well. According to
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, I am writing
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letter to
apply
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a scholarship
with
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your supervision. In case, all the seats are fulfilled by the students. Kindly advise the sponsors
those
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apply
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who overcome to support the poor students before now. I will be grateful and delight, if you have given
an
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opportunity. I'm anticipating your favourable reply at the earliest.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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