the advantages and disadvantages of internet discuss?
Computers have become indispensable nowadays,
however
, they have their merits and demerits; some people think that computers can control everything in modern man’s personal life, but others are of the belief that computers have negative impacts on the students. In the following lines, both aspects of computers will be discussed.
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effect
on a plethora of life’s parts. Computers are quite helpful for various kinds and levels of people to finalize their tasks. Suggestion
effects
For instance
, most of companies accomplish their financial documents Linking Words
such
as their employee’s pay slips, drawings or even their reports by using computers. Linking Words
In addition
, students in different education’s stages rely on computers to prepare their lessons by looking for pieces of information which they are Linking Words
need
through Google. Suggestion
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, computers make the life easier than before; they Linking Words
saving
time and efforts.
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, computers have their detrimental Linking Words
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, especially property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
on
the students; depending students on computers lead to decrease their thinking about any issue. As an evidence, most of the students when they make a research study about any subject they could copy a whole essay from the internet to their research paper. Suggestion
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Moreover
, some companies decrease their employees and replaced them with computerized equipment. Linking Words
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, computers should be used in a wise way to help people Linking Words
in particular
points and they should not depend on them Linking Words
instead
of their brains.
In conclusion, computers are essential nowadays and their benevolent more than their negatives, in case of, using computers should be controlled specifically when the youngsters use them Linking Words
such
as, when they doing any calculation, they should think in prim Linking Words
then
ensure their answers by using computers.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...