In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and giver your opinion.

It is often argued that the government prefers spending money on arts rather than public services. Public services are examples of caring about the well-being of the citizens and educational system of the

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the arts

is important. At the same time,

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urgent needs require equal attention too. Government

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a collection of tools and other articles used by an artisan to make jewelry or clothing or shoes

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in the art sector will definitely be able to attract tourists from all over the world.

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example, in

Singapore, there are many

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lighting shows put up in the city annually. Foreigners along with Singaporeans are able to admire the beauty of the word put up by the artists.

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, the Art Museums are free for the public to enter.

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allows viewers to not only appreciate the

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creativity, but

more importantly, learn about the history behind the paintings hung on the walls.

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, spending money on

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the arts

should be encouraged. Performances

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as music, dance and plays are

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part of

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the arts

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a

broadway

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entertainment. Seated audiences in the concert theatres are able to sit back, relax, and enjoy the show put up by the performers. Yet,

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the leaders

of the

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should place their focus on healthcare as well.

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, the recent pandemic has shed light

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on

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health care

must not be overlooked. The demand for high technology equipments to treat rose drastically as

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a large number

of patients had fallen ill due to the virus. It clearly shows that without the help of science, treatment would have been slower and the spread would be uncontrollable.

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, having a better education system impacts the society indirectly. With the aid of better teachers, the knowledge gained by students in the classroom will

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expand, practicing critical thinking. In the future while working in the

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the force of workers available

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, inevitably, students have the capability and

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the ability

to overcome challenges and contribute to the economy.

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, education is an important part of the society and should not be neglected. With that, I feel that proper funding of

arts sector

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the arts sector

is crucial

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society, although

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government's investments in public services play a very important role in our community.

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, any

country

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can live without music concerts, but absence of medicine will create significant problems. Not only that, the lack of education will open the

possiblities

a future prospect or potential

possibilities

possibility

of the

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undergoing poverty where

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effect is evident in most

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world countries.

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why the government should adequately finance public services in the

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place.