Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing( for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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as telecommuting, online study, online shopping and people can read the news about the world by their gadgets. But demerits also
exist about this
statement, nowadays the rate of cybercrime is increasing day
by day
due to machinery
and children are a misuse of their mobile phone
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of all nowadays most of the nation is facing the problem of corona pandemic so student did not do their study, but with the help of technology kids easily restart their study ,
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also
those are private employee they do their work from home with the help of telecommuting. So it is a beneficial thing for children as well as the worker.Additionally
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parents keep their third
eye on children also
they easily track the location of their kids .
Electronic gadgets have become a security man for every person.Apart from Accept space
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, in modern era masses have curiosity to wear new brand so they easily purchased clothes from online, because in online website they provide huge discount on on occasions
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in a whole day
then
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