In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is presumed by the certain set of societies that convincing the children to get indulged in hard toil will bring those glorious achievements;

however

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however, this

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scenario has an array of plus points along with the negative ones which cannot be denied.

This

essay delves the benefits and drawbacks of the given notion. To commence with, motivation and encouragement are two root merits of shelling out the message of working hard

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for

the children. In

this

contemporary era, everyone is

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in

the rat race to achieve the success and wealth. So is the case with the parents, they encourage their children to work hard to attain what they want in their life with great hard work. The motivation among the children ultimately ignites the fire inside them to reach at the authentic pinnacle and enjoy the stupendous fruition.

For instance

, the younglings are like molten clay, one can

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mould

them in

such

a way like they want them to be in the distant future.

On the other hand

,

this

message

also

has myriad negative consequences. The desire

inside

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in

the children to chase their dreams can cross the saturation point. Overconfidence can be the main problem which sometimes ultimately leads the children to

dark side

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the dark side

, if they do not capable to achieve what they

wanted once

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once wanted

.

For example

, the student who works round the clock to bag

first

position in the university cannot get the same what he/she

desired

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desired, then

then

this

will emerge him/ her into the mental condition like depression and insomnia because he/she has the thought in his mind about the message of working hard to get all but he fails to do that. These unrealistic goals may have

negative impact

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a negative impact

on the children. To conclude, undoubtedly, hard work

always pay

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always pays

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off, but

we never consider

this

for

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assuring

one because every coin has two sides like

this

aspect

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also has positive

also

positive and negative effects.

Thusly

, parents should motivate and encourage their children to do hardships despite growing the urge of chasing the unrealistic goals in them.