Some people think that people are responsible for their happiness. Others feel that happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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happiness
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life
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however
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On the one hand, many people think that prosperity can be massively affected by surrounding factors. One feels happier when he is surrounded by people who support and motivate him. Linking Words
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, generally, people are happier when they are with their friends and family because they feel more secure and content. Linking Words
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financial well-being
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the financial well-being
As a result
, materialistic things impart them a sense of satisfaction. While external factors can ensure materialistic Linking Words
happiness
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positive mindset
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For instance
, a number of extremely wealthy people in South Korea have committed suicide recently, apparently brought down by stress and other negative feelings.
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life
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experience becomes very light when people understand that they cannot control all of what happens in their lives, but might conduct how to react. Use synonyms
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happiness
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Moreover
, family relationship, personal aim and desire, and a peaceful mind are other important aspects of being happy in Linking Words
life
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For example
, one research turns out that people who are more socially connected to family, to friends, to Linking Words
community
, are happier, they are physically healthier and live longer than people who are less well connected.
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the community
role
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the role
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happiness but
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happiness, but
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