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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Fast
food
 is feeding the majority percent of mankind in many countries. Higher
intake
 of
this
 type of unhealthy
food
 embarks risk of diseases. To overcome
this
 issue increase in tax payment
on
Suggestion
for
 fast
food
would helps
Suggestion
would help
 to divert people to
intake
 healthy
food
. Before presenting my view, discussion on
pros
Suggestion
the pros
 and cons is necessary.
First
 and foremost in
majority
Suggestion
the majority
a majority
 of developed countries spends extravagant
amount
 of money for budget of Health care systems. As per
survey fifty
Accept comma addition
survey, fifty
precent
give an exhibition of to an interested audience
present
percent
recent
amount
 of
total budget
Suggestion
the total budget
 is dedicated
for
Suggestion
to
 the health department in most of the countries
aroung
in the area or vicinity
around
 the globe.
Secondly
,
intake
 of fast
food
 is exponentially increasing because of
this
, with less exercise it leads to myriad numbers of illnesses. Why should upper authorities would pay for health care if people are not understanding the side effects of fast
food
! Research shows, the majority of illnesses are due to the adequate
amount
 of
intake
 of fast
food
.
As a result
,
Accept space
,
government
Suggestion
the government
 could increase the
amount
 of tax which definitely reduce burden on economy to cure individuals.
However
, fast
food
 is not just an option for some of the individual but it's
necessity
Suggestion
a necessity
 because of the lower income.
In addition
, fast
food
 is cheaper compared to the healthy
food
,
such
 as vegetables and fruits so without any
dought
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
 middle class would opt fast
food
 as an alternative option. Going forward to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the need, and for development of
industry government
Accept comma addition
industry, government
 subsides the foods,
such
 as beef, and corn
instead
 of healthy foods.
As a result
, prices of
healthy
Suggestion
health
 products which is more beneficial always stay expensive. One group of individuals never be able to have enough
amount
 of money to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their families with nutritious
food
. After pondering merits and demerits, It can be concluded that, increase in tax would not dampen
this
 issue
inspite
Suggestion
in spite
 of that it makes it worst for citizens of that country.
Best
Suggestion
The best
 possible solution is affordable
healty
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
food
 products which automatically decrease interest of individuals in fast
food
. "Win win situation for governments as well as for people."
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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