changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK.

The graph shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK. All four modern technologies
shows
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show
in general upward trends.As
CD
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a CD
player
the percentage
of
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Of
access in homes in the UK rose gradually from 45% to 80-95% until 2006
/
07.After 2006
/
07 the percentage in the UK dropped slightly.
Likewise
, the income for
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
three modern technologies.There was
sharp climb
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a sharp climb
in Internet
that
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That
starts from 1998
/
99.
Furthermore
, the Mobile phone
also
went up, but fluctuated
wildly
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Wildly
.
Likewise
, there was
sharp climb
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a sharp climb
when in 2002
/
03 appeared DVD
player
, that
percentage
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Percentage
of homes that use DVD
player
went up to 80% and caught up with Mobile phone
and
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And
Internet.After success, CD
player
dropped slightly
compare
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compared
with Mobile, DVD and Internet. It is noticeable that the income for
CD
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a CD player
the CD player
player
is decreased in the 2006
/
07 for the other three
modern
used of a living language; being the current stage in its development
Modern
technologies in homes in the UK.
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