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Some people think that life is better in cities, however others claim that village life is far better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many of us believe that the
life
 can be better in a big metropolis
,
Accept space
,
while others find that country-side is more healthier.
This
 is a topic that often divides opinions, but I believe that depends on what we expect from our
life
 and what are our priorities. Nowadays, we live in a continuous development and more and more young people give village for a
life
 in a big city. A good reason why people prefer
that is
 because
life
 in cities can be more attractive and easier.
For example
, a young family with children have more options for their little baby to give them at a good school or kindergarten. Cities are very attractive for younger because having a night
life
 who is very animated, big malls to do shoppings, many opportunities regarding jobs finding.
Furthermore
 big cities have an airport for those who like to travel, has better medical services. Today there are many business people who prefer to buy a house in a countryside and to spend their free time there away from the cities.
On the other hand
, cities become very crowded and polluted and many people prefer to go to village
life
 even if
this
life
 means to be more simple.At countryside the atmosphere is more clear, the
life
 in general is healthier.
For example
, in our routine day when we wake up in the morning is better to hear a sound of animal
instead
 of machine sound. Taking everything into consideration, I sustain the view that
life
 in the village is better and healthier, even if we do not have the same comfort that we find in cities.
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