Car owner ship have increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now’big traffic jam’ How true do you think the statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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Nowadays everyone has a car
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which causes jams.
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will discuss in that essay. Going back by 30 years the number of car-owners were less.Only rich people could afford them.
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of the middle class people were able to a vehicle the average was surely not higher than one per family, because in any case it would have been useless for a family own more than a car. Today,
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, the scenario is completely changed: every family owns on average two cars, because they are cheaper and many ways
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financing the purchase are available for almost everyone. That growth in the car-users are bringing many traffic problems, especially in the big cities.
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for transportation
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of cars. To conclude, the exponential growth of the car-owners are giving lot of traffic problems, but is up to the authorities trying to discourage the use of vehicle offering a range of different alternative to the people.
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