The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?

After school, teenagers will go to the shopping mall to hang out with friends to relax after a day of lessons. Girls love to go into the boutiques and cosmetic shops to look for the newest products of their favourite brands; boys prefer to

wondering

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wander

wandering

in the sportswear store and game zone.

However

, since they could only get a few pocket money from their parents, much of the

time

they

only have window

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only have a window

shopping but not real purchase. It creates discontent that

adversely affect

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adversely affects

the young and society. In society, students are taught to spend their spare

time

to revise and develop their own interest to equip themselves for future development.

Although

the hobbies of the youth varies person to person, many of them like to go shopping mall with their peer to enjoy free air-conditioning and escape from going back home early.

In other words

, society regards

this

behaviour as wasting

time

for useless. Staying at shopping centres indeed cannot provide knowledge for children on academic subjects and may hinder their learning progress. It may argue that teenagers can

further

create bondings with their classmates after school when hanging out to shopping plazas.

However

, the

time

should be

limited but

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limited, but

not a large amount of

time

.

Otherwise

, young people will be less motivated to revise and finish their homework. Simultaneously, students staying at shopping malls all of the

time

may affect the business of retailers. Teenagers

are often being criticised

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have often been criticised

as creating noise when having window shopping. They do not have sufficient money to purchase,

however

, they still

standing

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stand

at

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on

the shelf and chatting with a loud voice.

This

annoying behaviour deteriorates the shopping environment which turns other customers are not willing to go shopping. All these may contribute to the worsening of business in the retail sector. In conclusion, the

teenage

a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity

teenager

should spend more

time

on studying

instead

of having window shopping at the shopping plazas. If they can achieve outstanding results in school, there will be a larger opportunity for them to succeed in their career. They can have enough money to go shopping and buy what they want at that

time

.