“Libraries are irrelevant in the age of the internet and should not be publicly funded.” Do you agree or disagree?

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Libraries are important cornerstones for a healthy society. Some school of people believe due to the rising era of

internet

, libraries do not hold its value

any more

at the present or from now on; usually used with a negative

anymore

. Not only

this

, but they are

also

of opinion that funds should not be granted for

such

noble cause which spreads free knowledge. I disagree with the above mentioned thoughts.

This

essay will discuss the significance of libraries in today's generation of

internet

and why its public funding necessary? The experience of reading physical books is incomparable. The essence of getting lost

into

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the

world

of stories uplifts

heart

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the heart

and the soul. Many people are habitual of reading various magazines and books in the libraries, as reading online does not create

divine atmosphere

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a divine atmosphere

which one can get being surrounded by the books. In countries where local gathering is not so common. Places like libraries give humans chance to meet like minded personalities and discuss on various topics. The

world

wide web has brought the entire

world

on a finger tip. It is a humongous source of information wherein; one can get all sorts of data just by few clicks.

However

, everyone is not fortunate enough to afford it. Though, it might be conveniently available in cities, but still there are few places which could not afford

this

leisure. Remote areas in developing countries like India, Africa, Bhutan

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

, wherein people barely get electric supply, thinking of

internet

service

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are

unimaginable. People could hardly afford two meals a day, in

such

situation purchasing

internet

plans

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are

out of

question

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the question

As a result

free funded libraries are the only source of knowledge to prosper

such

underprivileged communities. To conclude, free funded libraries not only play a vital role in shaping the life of

unfortunates but

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unfortunates, but

also

give the essence of sinking

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into

the

world

of books to attain immense pleasure and knowledge.

Therefore I

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Therefore, I

strongly believe that libraries must be publicly funded.

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“Libraries are irrelevant in the age of the internet and should not be publicly funded.” Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.

Living on earth would become difficult in the future. So, more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, like Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?