Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
Celebrities, in layman terms, are
influencers
and idols the public look up to. There are a variety of them ranging from actors and music idols to popular online streamers from social media platforms a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
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. Now it seems that in some countries, celebrities earn more than politicians, specifically seniors, due to advancement in technology and marketing to attract consumers in using the latest products entertainers Suggestion
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One main reason celebrities gain more revenue is because they are commonly seen on television. Suggestion
to advertise
For instance
, companies scout these artists for the purpose of acting and mainly advertising a product. In Linking Words
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day and age, entertainers could gain people's trust and persuade them to purchase the companies' products because of their well-known reputation, unlike the government, whereby they are busy running for the country. For that reason, it is undeniable that many developers will want to work with idols. Actively getting involved in Linking Words
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field of work is a large source of income for these celebrities and definitely, results in earning more than many politicians.
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society. Considered as celebrities, they are influential to the younger generations. How so? Linking Words
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Youtube
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such
as League of Legends and Overwatch, which many love to watch. The audiences Linking Words
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view, subscribe and comment on his videos, having another source of income for himself. Just by recording himself, he once revealed that he earned approximately $25 million USD annually, undoubtedly more than what many leaders receive. His influence led to many others following his footsteps by streaming their video games whenever they play. Linking Words
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can earn so much and have objective male pronoun, used to refer to a male human or animal
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a big impact on society.
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can be detrimental to the community. With the aid of modern technology, it could have a negative influence on the younger generations. To exemplify, it is not rare to see many idolising their favourite celebrities to the point that students neglect their studies, desiring to be Linking Words
youtubers
as well. Sure, many may argue that politicians can be someone who is of great influence. Suggestion
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a young age? It is obvious that having a much more entertaining job we to one’s life.
To conclude, it is conclusively clear that the aforementioned points prove that celebrities do earn more than politicians in some countries. Linking Words
Although
celebrities do not make the world become a dull place, we must take into account that we are the reason for the famous man to earn so much cash as compared to government officials. Linking Words
Instead
, contributing to the needy who are not even having basic necessities like food, shelter and clothes are much more important, Linking Words
thus
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