These days in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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A decade ago, people tend to choose teaching as
occupation
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an occupation
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however now
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however, now
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trend is dramatically decreasing in many countries.
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paragraph, we will discuss both the drawbacks and their respective solution.
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first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
of all, the wages of a
teacher
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are far less than expected
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a lawyer in the UK earns 5 times more as compared to the
salary
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of the
teacher
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having the same experience.
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In
order to cope with
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problem
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government should increase the
salary
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of the instructor significantly.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
the
teacher
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can earn their well-being. Moving on.
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critical obstacle is that the working-hours for the school
teacher
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are pretty high. More-ever the
teacher
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has to check papers and assignments.
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the flip
side they
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side, they
are not able to spend their quality time with their family
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so
to a very great extent or degree
So
to address
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problem, the Government must hire more staff in secondary school so the workload is distributed among the staff.
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, the
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issue is the behaviour of the students towards the
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, some of the pupils did not behave well in class which frustrate the teachers of a
high-school
a public secondary school usually including grades 9 through 12
highschool
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, they decided to quit their jobs.
the
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The
solution of
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obstacle is that the parent should teach their kids how to respect their instructors as well as teach manner because the
teacher
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is a key to the development of a society.
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a conclusion
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there
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and many critical issues
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as
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,
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,
working-hours
kids
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kids'
behaviour.
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The
possible solutions to these problems are to increase the
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, limit the work-hours and change in the attitudes of kids.
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The
governments and parents are responsible to cope out from these issues.
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