Nowadays, there are more workers working from home and more students studying from home, due to the fact that that computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

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In today’s time there are more employees working from

home

and more children studying from

home

, the reason is that

computer

technology

is easily available and more affordable. I think

that is

a negative trend.

To begin

with the trend of working and learning from

home

is beneficial below are the two main reasons for it.

Firstly

due the latest

technology

and its affordability everything can be easily available

For example

due to latest pandemic of Covid-19 many of companies have opted to let their employees to work from

home

this

wouldn’t be possible if the

computer

technology

was not there and even due internet availability and reach lot of students are able to talk there teachers and even the lectures are able to share their knowledge, to their students.

Secondly due

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Secondly, due

technology

easily available to employees the companies spend on the campus and travel expense have been cut-down.

However

, there are many benefits of

computer

technology there

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technology, there

are many disadvantages to

this

also

. As you see that in recent times due to the

technology

and internet many of students have less physical activity and they tend to spend most of time in front of their

computer

screens due which there is more strain on eyes and eyesight may become weak.

Secondly work

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Secondly, work

from

home

situation many of employees spend most of time sitting at

home

. Due which they may face some other health issues. To conclude with the advantages and disadvantages of

computer

technology

I think that disadvantage will have

double impact

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a double impact

on the residents. Because if the automation makes resident life simple more it makes them lazy and inactive due which there would be

lot

Suggestion

lots

of problems and stress.

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