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Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree.

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It is sometimes argued that in sprite of the technological development, there will be increasing number of newspapers consumed in the future. I completely disagree with
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 declaration. The
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 reason why I think online
newspaper
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 is a
megatrend
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Megatrend
 that will take the place of
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newspaper
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the newspaper
 soon in the future is that online
newspaper
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 is extremely handy, especially in the industry 4.0 era when each person
get
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gets
 at least one own technological device, reading news on the internet may be the priority choice of them. Bringing the smart phone and accessing to internet, they can practically catch up with the flow of the
information
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 around the world and don’t need to bring the papers that make their bag heavier. Another reason is that the
information
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 on the online
information
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 always in the state of being revised regularly and the reader can grasp
it in about some
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about it in some
 minutes. In the past, the readers had to read the
newspaper
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 carried
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with
 them every morning while in the today’s world, the readers can keep themselves informed whenever they want. They can even smoothly find out about the old
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 kept as archives in the memory of the website.
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 but not least, it’s free to read
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a
 digital
newspaper
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 while you have to spend money to read physical one. Even the cost of
newspaper
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 may not costly
much but
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much, but
 reading news on the internet can help the readers to diminish a portion of their spending compared to those who are not. In conclusion, I do not believe that
newspaper
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 can constantly be the main resource of the
information
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 source.
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