A large company in your area has decided to spend certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sport team for two years, or pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. in your letter 1. describe the benefits of sponsoring the sport team. 2. summarize the benefits of paying for the concerts. 3. say how you think company should spend the money.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to outline my views to help you outweigh

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how your organization

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fund the money.

Firstly

, children are the future of tomorrow. The students near our local area have a highly qualified background in sports, and some of their parents could not support their physical activities. A couple of years

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their events could benefit their physical and mental health, and the players could represent national and international tournaments.

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could advantage on their resume and secure a scholarship for future academics.

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, concerts are an excellent way for all generations to spend quality time from their busy life schedule.

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, it would fetch musicians to expose their unique talent.

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, other factors

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as public safety, food, and accommodation lead to spending over your budget. To conclude, after looking over advantages, I recommend your company take a step in funding to the local area sports team as there are many positive outcomes. I will look forward to hearing about your decision. Thank you. Madhav