At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no doubt that the age statistics of countries can give significant information about it. Today, there is a considerable young society in some countries,
on the other hand
, there is a great number of older people in some of them. Despite the disadvantages, there are remarkable advantages of Linking Words
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occasion.
To start with, even though there are many benefits of Linking Words
young community
, the effect of country development and the health possibilities are the most common two. Suggestion
a young community
Firstly
, the young adults Linking Words
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to young workers. Suggestion
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In other words
, everybody can struggle comfortably according to their abilities. To give an example, the overwhelming majority of Turkey society is young adults. Linking Words
Therefore
, there is no the lack of employees. Linking Words
In addition
, people can effort dynamically. That's why, they can help to improve their country. Linking Words
Secondly
, the youngs should be more healthy statistically. Linking Words
This
situation can help to many opportunities. Linking Words
For instance
, the COVID-19 virus has affected the older people more rather than the youngs. For Linking Words
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reason, some countries, which have the older people, have experienced the pandemic by taking vital damages. Linking Words
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, the death rates are lower in some countries like Turkey rather than others.
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Secondly
, there are important drawbacks of the young state in the countries. Linking Words
For example
, It can create an unemployment. Since there is a big young populace which already trial, all production areas can full Linking Words
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Moreover
, the universities can be inadequate for all youngs. As a considerable evidence, today, many teachers who graduated from the university in Turkey, can not work in the schools because of the staff. Many engineers can not find any employment to work and so on.
To sum up, there is significant impact on the distribution of population in a country. In my opinion, if the governments can prevent the unemployment with their politics, the benefits of the young population outweigh the drawbacks.Linking Words
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