You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the malfunctioning modem that I purchased from your shop on

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week. The modem performance was good in the

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2 days after installing but from the 3rd day, I feel a signalling problem. When I was

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a video call that I need to do frequently while working from home, I found

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disconnection from the internet.

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, I called my internet service provider to check their line, but after the checks, they confirmed it is for modem signal fluctuation. As I am engaged with different projects all around the world, it is mandatory for me to be online most of the time and respond to different technical queries promptly.

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sort of problem, not only wasting efficiency, but

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harming with a financial loss, and which is sorely disappointed.

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product has 6 months replacement warranty period, so I want to replace it immediately. What you need to do to send the new product without any delays. I trust you will act quickly as so as you received the letter. Yours faithfully, Mazhar

Candor Khan

Jul 11, 2020

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