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Many museum charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?

#museum #charge #admission #people
The policy of
management
Suggestion
managing
 the
museum
 is very impressive to raise the cultural side of society and
nationality
Suggestion
nation
. It means the status of charging some
museum
 is free while the others selling tickets. In my opinion, there are both pros and cons to how people should visit the
museum
. Making money by charge visitors has many benefits to better manage the museums.
For example
, they can spend more money to repair the buildings of
museum
Suggestion
the museum
museums
 or improve the security system and use new technologies like digital guides.
This
 facility helps the good maintenance as a plus point to encourage more people to visit the
museum
. The other advantages of charging people is the fact that people have more attention about the arts and histories of the things compared with the free
museum
. On the other side, one of the important drawbacks of the museums that charged people is decreased visit it means the poor people or students cannot use the cultural benefits of
this
 places. The attraction of free
museum
 Is too higher more than the monetary one. So the economy of the area near the
museum
 dependent on tourism, can be damaged.
As a result
,
government
Suggestion
the government
 should determine the policy of museums to consider the situation, it means they can
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 the status of the city or region to get information about
amount
Suggestion
the amount
 of local people or foreign tourists to how interest and
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, after that according to the effects of finance on visitors make a proper decision.
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