A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people argue that the
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of a nation is not responsible for public
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, and it is a personal
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. I believe it is a duty of both. It is necessary that a person should look after its
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;
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, the
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has a role to play in the well-being of the nation. At the onset, a healthy lifestyle is a personal duty, as nothing will work until you work. In a day-to-day life, there are many easy ways to keep yourself healthy and higher authorities have no control over it.
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, eat healthy home cooked food and avoid fast food.
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, fitness experts suggest at least thirty minutes of exercise a day can keep many chronic illnesses away.
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, have a required amount of shuteye at night. In the aforementioned suggestions governance has no role, they can only underpin it, but it is a personal
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.
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, a gym in all parks has been constructed by the Indian
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ministry;
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,
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it will not help until people use it on their own. At the opposite end of the spectrum, the
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sector of a nation requires its ruler's attention. When it comes to serious threats, expert supervision of doctors is most sought after. Invariably, having ill-managed public
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sector,
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citizens may not be healthy, no mater how hard they try.
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, moderate earners are unable to afford the fees of doctors and they die. It is a
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responsibility
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that they provide fellow citizens with the high-class hospitals and qualified doctors at a nominal fee. To illustrate, in India many dispensaries are established merely for the weaker sections of Indian society. In conclusion,
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leading a healthy lifestyle is an individual's personal duty, a
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should provide citizens with a basic and affordable
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care system.
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it comes to fitness, the individual's
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and the
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efforts go hand in hand.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personal accountability
  • health outcomes
  • public health campaigns
  • regulations
  • healthcare services
  • environmental quality
  • socio-economic factors
  • governmental intervention
  • healthy living
  • informed health decisions
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