Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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It is a common belief among psychologists for many years that the feelings of people can easily be affected by
colors
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the colours
colours
.
That is
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why, proper attention must be given while decorating offices and hospitals with various
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color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
schemes. I strongly agree, that
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color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
can have a huge impact on our emotions. One evident benefit of selecting
suitable
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a suitable colour
suitable colour
color
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for offices and hospitals is that it helps to bring positive vibes.
Moreover
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, there are
also
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some
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
that can have a good impact on our health. To illustrate, it is preferable to have green
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color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
coloured
walls in your study or work place as it helps to keep your eyesight good, whereas black
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color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
can have
devastating affect
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devastating effects
devastating effect
a devastating effect
. Psychologists in their study have proved that vivid
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
enlighten one's mood, while dark
colors
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colas
can cause serious mental health related issues
such
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as depression and stress.
As a result
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, hospitals around the world have light
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color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
.
In addition
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, dark
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color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
absorbs heat due to which temperature rises inside,
this
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can cause serious affect on those living in warm areas.
On the other hand
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, people nowadays consider
such
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findings as stereotypes and are more considered in making the interior look
good
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better
rather than focus on the
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color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
.
For instance
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, most of the shopping malls have
dark colored architecture
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a dark coloured architecture
dark coloured architecture
used to make it look more charismatic and
still people feel
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people still feel
good after visiting there. To conclude, some
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
can have a serious impact on both your emotions and health but the
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
are prolonged. If you are staying in a place for
long
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longer
then
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it is important to consider the
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color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
schemes that are suitable, whereas if you are just visiting a place for a short period of time
then
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it does not matter what
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color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
they have.
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