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Due to the development of the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that with the rise of the
internet
, open libraries do not have that importance as before.
This
 essay disagrees with the above statement because there are
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
 readers who are not so known to online search tools.
Secondly
, public book rooms have that aura where one prefers to sit and study. Not everyone has an aptitude of using the
internet
, especially the older generation who depends more on reading books rather than searching online. People above 50, find books and magazines as a preferable source because they are used to them.
Moreover
, the
internet
 was not so developed in those times, which
also
 makes book rooms more dependable. In a survey found, old people find books as more convenient, because of the age bar, they cannot focus on screens for a
longer
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long
 time;
furthermore
, they have not used phones and computers much, which is another point. Books are the reliable and authentic source of knowledge, where
relevant details
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relevant, details
 are filtered and drafted. But when we use search tools to find, there's a plethora of
information including
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information, including
 unrelated materials that are not so useful. Another important factor is an aura that the place has for book readers. It provides one a peaceful environment to study in isolation.
Mumbai oldest library
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The Mumbai oldest library
 has daily visitors of over 1000, which includes young children to adults and even senior citizens. In conclusion, though the
internet
 has a vast role, but it cannot
entirely
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Entirely
 put libraries out of our lives. Readers looking for discipline and isolation will always prefer these places, and old people are
also
 more driven to them.
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