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Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods?Which is the most effective method?

Nowadays, many companies are trying to enhance the sale rate of their production by different types of advertisement
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 as, outdoor, online or media ad. As far as I am concerned, the advertising in internet has got the biggest influence on society in the twenty
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 century.
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 with, the companies use advert on TV, billboards, in newspapers or social media in order to make the product well-known. One of the most common type of ad is a TV commercial. Celebrities and famous actors are often used for promoting some item, as fans of
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 person will be more likely to buy it.
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, according to the latest publications of PR agency, the commercial of alcohol-free beverage «Pepsi» with Lionel Messi has increased the sales of the company by 43%.
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 they ought to rely on the target audience, while they are choosing the method of promoting.
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, nowadays the most effective type of advertising is online, as the majority of people tend to spend a lot of time in the virtual world.
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The largest
 amount of money is spent on Google Adwords and targeting by companies, since social media are widely used all over the world.
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Moreover PR
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Moreover, PR
 can be done by bloggers or influence in social networks. Recent studies have revealed that Instagram became the best place for promoting new products among the group of people 18-35 in 2019. To sum up, there are a variety of practices, which can be used for encouraging people to buy a product.
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, the most powerful tool for advertising is the internet, because it can reach all people in any part of the world.

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