Write a letter to a friend about an upcoming event in your town. Include What the event is Why they would be interested An invitation to stay with you

Dear Johnson, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the
food
festival that will be happening
next
month in my town.
Food
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The food
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festival is held every year in the month of February. During the event, the participants will have to show their culinary skills and it will be judged by master chefs of the country.
Additionally
, people from various regions will have a stall in which they sell the famous
food
items from their region. I am sure you would like to join the event as you are interested in
food
items and have a special skill of making
fusion
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a fusion
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food
. Fusion
food
is always in demand during
such
events and
have
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a
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apply
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special recognition from the government.
Moreover
, it’s a platform for you to show your extraordinary skills to
the
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apply
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people. During
the
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this
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time, you can stay with me
instead
of
checking-in
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to a hotel. Hotels will be expensive for that time due to demand.
Moreover
, we can enjoy
together
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ourselves together
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if you stay with me. Hope to be together soon during the time. Regards, Barry
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