Write a letter to a friend about an upcoming event in your town. Include What the event is Why they would be interested An invitation to stay with you
Dear Johnson,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the food
festival that will be happening next
month in my town.
Food
festival is held every year in the month of February. During the event, the participants will have to show their culinary skills and it will be judged by master chefs of the country. Add an article
The food
A food
Additionally
, people from various regions will have a stall in which they sell the famous food
items from their region.
I am sure you would like to join the event as you are interested in food
items and have a special skill of making fusion
Add an article
a fusion
food
. Fusion food
is always in demand during such
events and have
Change the verb form
has
a
special recognition from the government. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, it’s a platform for you to show your extraordinary skills to the
people.
During Correct article usage
apply
the
time, you can stay with me Correct determiner usage
this
instead
of checking-in
to a hotel. Hotels will be expensive for that time due to demand. Correct your spelling
checking in
Moreover
, we can enjoy together
if you stay with me.
Hope to be together soon during the time.
Regards,
BarryCorrect pronoun usage
ourselves together
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite