Should countries restrict foreign companies? Do you agree or disagree?

There are two factors to develop a
country including
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country, including
internal and external investment. Some people believe that foreign investors are unnecessary for the countries and they need to be limited. Personally, I strongly support the foreign investors and government should open the doors to invite them in. On the one hand, there are several reasons why foreign companies should be welcomed.
Firstly
,
although
their aims are profit, they
also
help to improve infrastructure in the host states, machine, technology
in particular
.
Secondly
, the new cultures were brought by positive foreigners and the citizens are not only leant the alternative
languages but
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languages, but
also
have opportunities to approach the new civilizations.
For example
, Vietnam
became
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has become
a developing country since 1995 because of welcoming oversea aids and supply. It is affirmed that the more
extenal
happening or arising or located outside or beyond some limits or especially surface
external
finance, the more development.
On the other hand
, governments should create more necessary conditions to attract distant investments.
That is
, companies, which are not in native places, are not only allowed to take businesses but
also
had priory tax policies. As an illustration, Samsung, one of the biggest investing factories in Vietnam, were reduced 12%
taxes
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tax
for its revenue every
years
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year
.
However
, Politburo should supervise constantly these organizations to avoid tax-evasion.
Were
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Where
leaders turn
blind eye
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a blind eye
, they would soon face to loosing their enormous profit. In conclusion, national leaders should not prevent
allien
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Allien
allowing
online
collections to aid
interal
happening or arising or located within some limits or especially surface
internal
integral
interval
because they bring a numerous financial and
infratructural
benefits
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benefit
.
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