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It is common practice for some students to take a gap year between high school and university in order to do charitable work abroad in under developed countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people of doing volunteer work?

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In
this
modren
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
 world
,
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,
the counting of educated people is significantly increasing
,
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,
as it is
compulsury
required by rule
compulsory
 for all the people.
it
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It
 is observed that
,
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,
to take one
year
 of
study
 gap between high school and
bechelor
a man who has never been married
bachelor
 degree and do some welfare
work
 in overseas is in trend for students of backward nation.
this
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This
vouge
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Vouge
bag
 has many pros and cons that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will discuss in the
next
paragraps
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraphs
paragraph
.
firstly
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Firstly
,
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,
in the favour of doing charitable
work
 in abroad, children are not enough mature to do
study
 in overseas so
thats
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that's
 why they prefer to do some charitable
work
 before college degree.
Undoubtly
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Undoubtedly
,
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,
essential years of
study
 is a part of
education but
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education, but
 it
never make
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never makes
has never made
 teenagers mentally strong or nor teach them to survive in society independently.
For instance
, approximately 70% students do charitable
work
 in foreign countries before
degree
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the degree
,
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,
the purpose is to gain experience of life so they can understand higher
study
 level easily along with part time job to cope up with their personal expenditure
by
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of
 their own.
thus children
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Thus, children
Thus children
 get expert in
this
year
 of
gap
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the gap
.
in
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In
 contrast, some children make
theirselves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
 diligent in doing charitable
work
,
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,
resulted their mind get
bloacked
closed to traffic
blocked
booked
 for
further
study
 and they do not concentrate on
stduy
be a student; follow a course of study; be enrolled at an institute of learning
study
.
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.
In addition
 to it
,
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,
youngsters forget all the formulas and
baisc
pertaining to or constituting a base or basis
basic
base
 of
eassential
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
study
 so they face so many difficulties in
further
 education, cause of
this
,
Accept space
,
some students quit
study
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studying
 and start
wondering
migratory
wandering
 freely and harassing their parents for money for personal expense.
therfore
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Therefore
Therefor
Therfore
, gap of one
year
 is not always fruitful for all the youngsters.
in
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In
 conclusion.
whereas
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Whereas
, doing welfare
work
 for a
year
betwen
internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
 school and college
make
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makes
 students experienced on the
otherhand
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other hand
,
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,
students lost their concentration of
studing
social or financial or professional status or reputation
standing
student
studding
.
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