You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, apologize for damaging the product/stuff explain what happened say how are you going to fix the issue You should write at least 150 words.

#friend #product #stuff

Dear Sam

Hope

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Hope,

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you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to apologise

that

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for

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your

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the

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watch

is damaged

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which I borrowed from you

last

week. I feel so sorry to harm your favourite watch. I know

this

watch was gifted by your dad and how much you care for it. When I bought your watch, it

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was

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working in very good condition. Yesterday, in the morning I took the watch to wear, suddenly my brother

get

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slipped on my back

due to

water on the floor and your watch fell down.

Then

I pick

your

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up your

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watch and find that the front glass gets

broke

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broken

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. It is my responsibility to fix

because

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it because

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I don’t want to break that trust that you

shown

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have shown

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to me. I

already given

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gave

have already given

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your watch for repair to the company. It will

ready

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be ready

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within two days. Hope you forgive me for

this

. Stay Safe Gaurav

Submitted by Gaurav Verma on Sun Jul 12 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

149 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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