Money should be spent on creating new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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THERE ARE A MYRIAD OF THINGS ON WHICH THE REGIME SHOULD THINK TO ENHANCE AND THE SOME BUILDINGS ARE ONE OF THEM LIKE MUSEUMS AND HALLS. SOME BELIEVE THAT IT IS NOT A BETTER IDEA TO SPENT CURRENCY ON THE EXISTING BUIDINGS
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OF CONTRUCTING NEW ONE.
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ESSAY WOULD 100% NOT CONCURE WITH THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO THE ADVATAGES OF INVESTING IN THE ANCIENT BUILDINGS THAN FORMINGA A LATEST. I THINKS IT IS A BETTER TO CONSIDERED THE CONDITION OF THE BUILDINGS PRIORLY.
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WOULD ASSIST IN MAKING A WISE DECISION THAT WOULD BE IN TH FAVOUR OF EVERYONE. ON THE ONE HAND, WHEN WE SPENT MONEY ON CONSTRUCTING A FRESH BUILDINGS, THE BUSINESS OR THE AUTHORITY MIGHT BE IN A NEED OF A PLETHORA OF CURRENCY AND LAND TO AFFORD.
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CIRCUMSTANCES SOAR THE PRESSURE ON THE
ECONOMY
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. BECAUSE OF
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,
ECONOMY
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WOULD DECLINE AND PROVIDE A DETRIMENTAL CONSEQUENCES TO THE CONTINENT.
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, ACCORDING TO THE OXFORD UNIVERSITY SURVEY IF THE UK REPORT, 70% OF THE DEVELOPING COUNTRIES HAVE LOW
ECONOMY
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OWING TO BUILD A LATEST DESINGED CONSTRUCTION.
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, IF THE wage INVESTED IN REPAIRING THE OLD BUILDINGS THAT ARE ALREADY HAS SOME SUITABLE BASE THAT IT DOES NOT REQUIRED A LOT OF wage.
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WOULD DIMINISHES THE BURDEN ON THE FINACIAL DEPARTMENT OF THE NATION.
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,
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WOULD NOT BE AFFECTED MUCH IN COMPAIRED TO MAKING A NEW CONSTRUCTION.
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, THERE WILL THE BALANCE FROM BOTH THE POINT OF VIEW THAT BUILDINGS OBTAIN A FRESH LOOK WITH THE ANCIENT FUNDAMENTAL STRUCTURE.
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, AS PER THE AUSTRALIAN FINANCE DEPARTMENT STUDIES, THERE HAVE BEEN SURGE IN THE
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EVEN AFTER REFORMING THE OLD BUILDINGS WITH THE LATEST INNOVATION STUCTURE. IN CONCLUSION, IT DOES NOT MATTER WHETHER THE FABRIACATION IS A COMPLETELY NEW OR OLD AS LONG AS IT FULFILL THE REQUIREMENTS OF THE CONTINENT.
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, THE AUTHORITY SHOULD TAKE A WISE DECISION BECAUSE AT THE END, IT IS THE MATTER OF THE CIVILIAN.
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  • symbolizes
  • evolving
  • aspirations
  • incorporate
  • accessibility
  • catalyst
  • economic development
  • heritage
  • conserves
  • cultural
  • integrity
  • operational inefficiencies
  • sustainably
  • repurpose
  • throwaway culture
  • carbon footprint
  • environmental degradation
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