These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Healthcare improvements have reduced the risk of so many serious illnesses that people nowadays tend to depend on their services. In fact, the values of keeping in shape

is almost forgotten

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are almost forgotten

. I agree that doctors and medicine are considered to be the best method throughout the world today.

Firstly

, well-qualified doctors and the scientific researches on pharmaceuticals reassure people. It takes at least 5 or 6 years training to become a doctor and

also

scientists have to do many experiments on the medicine before putting it into uses.

For example

, the rubella vaccine is widely used around the world after

10

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a 10

-year study

.

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.

Thanks to its application, 95% of the world population have been saved. It is clear that patients feel secure when they follow the advice of doctors to cure their disease.

Secondly

, building a healthy routine requires a lot of time and efforts while taking medicine helps people recover in a short period. Fitness

centers

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Centers

have been established every corner of one city and attracted many people.

However

, they often give up after 1

month joining

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month, joining

the sports

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

centre

because they get frustrated waiting for changes on their bodies. According to Queen's University's survey, only 10% participants continued the training course after the

first

month in SO gym. Obviously, people have a tendency to choose

the easier

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the easy

path to keep fit which is making appointments with doctors rather than spending time

to do

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doing

exercise regularly. In conclusion, the majority

invest

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invests

for

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in

health by taking medical care and pharmaceutical products

instead

of following healthy habits these days. I think it would be better if people participate in a health course or a sport club that helps to prevent illnesses because sometimes sickness cannot be cured.