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Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of Covid. In what ways has covid affected the types of interactions people have? Has this become a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 age and time who would have imagined a scenario
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 as
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 of living of people around the world has changed and the most evident change is
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 human interaction.
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 essay would state both advantages and disadvantages of
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 change along with the reasons why
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 is a positive development. The most amazing part of human interaction is the
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 we greet. Whether it’s a
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friend, we
 hug or a
colleague we
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colleague, we
 shake hands, the fact that it involves a touch which expresses
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a love
 and warmth is a part we all miss dearly. Everyone has moved and adopted the Indian
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 has certainly put an end to all the times you meet and catch up with your friends over a drink or sit back and enjoy a meal together with relatives. These are the biggest disadvantages that have hindered human interactions.
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, as far as interactions go all is not bad. In the sphere of office arena, Covid has had some positive effects. The work from home has given rise to more online meetings and the workforce, in general, has adapted quickly to the new norm.
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, there have been more than 60% rise in the usage of applications like Zoom and Ms teams amongst working professionals. Physical meetings have been
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 online meetings and it is work as usual.
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 has come out as a winner when it comes to saving fuel and time while physically travelling
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 meetings and
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 has resulted in more quality time with family for working professionals. To conclude, humans are adaptable and resilient by nature. People have refused to bow down to the Covid threat and have adapted quickly. While there are both positive and negative changes that have come up, we can for sure say it has been a positive development in terms of office interaction.

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